Heirs of Fire: The Last Bloodline - Reviews

The story is captivating and interesting. keep it up

There is no world building, no character development. The title does not fit the story, no one has there own personality, just plain janes. No build up to action just bang and if anything get to hard here is the system to power up the mc. All in all just boring

Very good novel. Good grammar, good story, good character development. An evil MC, a manipulator, calm MC. Please try to read if you like MC with these characteristics

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until now the story has been good the mc is quite likable and although he is a super op character it does not affect the story much overall if u wondering if you should give it a try. try it you'll like it

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"Natsu, enough," Erza told him quietly. "Or I will send you back to Magnolia and tell Master that you're not capable of handling such an important job."

I felt a presence from the kitchen.

"Creuset's team?" Murrue repeated with surprise.

"The answer of number one is a foolish human," said Mamat.

cold CEO. always the same but it's good though