Heir of Chaos: Mythic Magic - Reviews

I was reading this as a favor to the author but I must say I am incredibly impressed. The use of vivid imagery combined with just right amount of action keeps my interest throughout the entire prologue. I am curious to see this Ojero and what he us all about. But still, so far I am very impressed with his story telling and world building abilities. Well done. Just one critique, what does Lazarus look like?

Fantastic world built and a strong plot. I love the characters and their interactions. The flow of the chapters is pretty engaging that I didn't feel bored at all. Though punctuation corrections at some places should be taken care of.

Definitely a worthy one to add to your library.

I really liked the world building and how the story starts, a good book.

The story has a rich world building and amazing characters that are well thought out and developed!

The author possess a rich vocabulary and strong grammar skills, making the story an enjoyable reading experience.

If you guys have a little bit of time, I strongly recommend giving this novel a try!

Fantastic world built and a strong plot. I love the characters and their interactions. The flow of the chapters is pretty engaging that I didn't feel bored at all. Though punctuation corrections at some places should be taken care of.

Definitely a worthy one to add to your library.

This is a review for my own book, but I do think you will all enjoy it!

The book focuses on Ojero Guestino who gains the ability to copy other mages powers with a dark twist to them! The origins of his ability are responsibility for both it's power, and the feelings of society towards it!

Some parts of the opening may be slower, but I promise it will all be worth it soon enough!

Enjoy!

Perfect writing, portrayal of characters. I enjoyed reading from first till last. Everyone should give this a try!

Good setting and pacing. It's also engaging and unique. Nice few chapters in, so continue updating.

I would say, I agree to the whole comments. The amount of details and vivid description is insane! This definitely got me hook. I just read the chapter 1 and I can't wait to read more. Please everyone give this a try!

The first chapter will hook you so bad. The amount of content is also just so much. I like it so far

This is a review for my own book, but I do think you will all enjoy it!

The book focuses on Ojero Guestino who gains the ability to copy other mages powers with a dark twist to them! The origins of his ability are responsibility for both it's power, and the feelings of society towards it!

Some parts of the opening may be slower, but I promise it will all be worth it soon enough!

Enjoy!

Perfect writing, portrayal of characters. I enjoyed reading from first till last. Everyone should give this a try!