Heavens fortune system - Reviews

Grammars not bad but can still be improved other then that I hope you start releasing more chapters. I definitely where the story is headed

Cream of the crop. Well, at least for webnovel standards I would say. There aren't that many books that can compare to this one quality-wise.You should keep in mind that I only read the first five chapters, so I would advise you to just give it a try since you might find your new favorite book.^^The only thing bothering me is his spacing between paragraphs. But every author has a different opinion regarding that.^^

Tbvh at first the pacing didn’t get me, but as I kept reading I got hooked, really good write up, looking forward to reading more of these.?

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The story is starting to get really interesting even though it only has four chapters. And that's the problem ? Won't you update anymore? ? I really wanna read more of this story.

good grief finally a fanficrion of naruto thats is not 'here i go being op in 3 chapters' not a lot of them here slow development is not bad the author needs to lay ground base to the story and lay roads for it thanks for writing this story

After eating some more of her tofu, he left the room with a thoughtful mind.

[Host is still a soul and will momentarily meet the godess from the world you will reside in]

"Hi, I am Rex." I could feel the excitement in our class because of the girls. Oh god!

saat aku duduk mencium aroma alkohol dan juga asap rokok disana kepalaku langsung pusing dan mengingat masa itu.

this was the only way....the only way to save..." as she said

After thinking for a little about what he was going to do next when the fish started to smell amazing seeing the abundance of it Seth was sure he wouldn't be able to finish it all today. Seeing a bit of fish float towards him Jansen bowed his head slightly "Thanks" Getting the gist of what he said, Seth repeated it and gave him his thanks whilst pointing towards the metal.