Heavens fetus - Reviews

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it's tough to maintain 6 couples throughout and many times I feel that I lose focus but then it beings it back together which is a nice experience to have since my attention span is not that good.

The novel is quite good. The MC desired to cultivate is understandable. The background characters act quite reasonably.The MC has a very powerful artifact but he did not actively use it and stride to increase his power with his knowledge and hard work. The subplots are surprisingly decent, some problems the MC has been resolved quite naturally and did not feel like force conflict. 60 chapters and not a hint of romance, it's a good chance of pace.

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

is decent and has potential but it hasnt been updated in forever.............................................................................

Its an interesting story with fantastic plot and loveable characters. Whats there not to love in this story? I usually don't read original works but I can make an exemption for this one. Keep up the good work!

600 lords:ddie invisible dragon! Uwahhhhh!!

"Yi Shin, is too cute, those pointed nose and cubby chin can I want to pinch it! ....  can I Aunt Yuan?" Lian pleaded

Rani tersenyum manis.Kuminta minta ibu duduk di samping om Danil,tapi ibu malah menggeser kursi dan duduk disamping Rani.

"Well, I didn't notice first that he's Kookie. He's really a grown up man now." I looked at Jungkook and smiled at him.

"Wae? Kau tidak suka berdekatan denganku?" bisik Sehun pelan kepadanya.

"What's wrong, captain?! Is it enemy?!" Bartolomeo hurriedly asked and even crossed his fingers, ready to defend. He was startled by Jhins expression.