Heaven’s Path - Reviews

great great great great great great great great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The lingo is a little at first for a city versus a town but otherwise good so far. Grammar needs littles fixes here and there like using in and on at the wrong place but readable. Good story progession so far and released daily as of when i read it

Hello and welcome to EndlessFantasy Translation, where we do just slightly better than MTL because we know how to change the names of characters from chinese to english. Grammar? Pronouns? What are those?Aside from this, the story is just trash. It's terrible. The pacing is slow and the plot is boring. There is nothing imaginative about the story at all, the MC is exactly what you might expect as a system-turned noveau riche. All the side characters are defined by their job with personalities so shallow its borderline unbelievable. The rich guy is a rich guy, the reporter is a reporter, the talk show host is a talk show host, the coworker is a coworker. They have literally no personality or character development and it appears the author doesn't intend on changing that.TL;DRWish fulfillment story, except the characters are shells and the translators westernized all the names.

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Preety good, cant wait for them to become the vampire squad                                    

Love this book, I am broke with coins now after unlocked all the chapters with my coins, but it's worthy! Have added the book to my collection!

i really like this story. it is beautifully written and has an amazing plot. I would totally recommend this book. the author has done an amazing job for it.

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After the 7th major battle, finally, less than 8,000 enemy vessels appeared in Neverwinter airspace. The last fight from the final resistance of the planet were cut short by the bombardment of an advanced weapon harnessing the power of the dying Sun. The three-month long intergalactic war was finally ended after the unstable planet's core was shattered, effectively destroying the remnants of the final resistance.

Haruki and Ayumu began to inch closer and closer to the ravine and have not come across a deadly situation yet it was more like sightseeing for them, especially for Haruki who was new to this world in general. They once had to work together to ward off a Demonic Ant Eater, a low rank one beast that was in the way of their route to the cave, there was no way around the beast, it clearly smelled one of them from the way it was attentively searching the surroundings so they had to make a decision on how to proceed.

I wake up to Rosy's head sleeping on my shoulder and one of her soft big boobs are pressing on my side and slightly exposed. I like boobs and butts. The blankets are half covering us messily. I check my watch that I took off last night. 05:30. Well Rosy didn't kill me in my sleep so that is a good sign. I slip out from her grasp and place a pillow under her head. I get dressed quickly and I exit the truck with my weapons. I grab Rosy's clothes and search them briefly before opening the door. As the morning air goes in I see her wrap herself in the blanket more leaving only her head out. I snap a picture then put my smartphone away gotta keep memories. I put all her clothes inside and close the door. I stretch and then eat some breakfast. I then maintain my weapons and arm myself with my knife. I am going hunting maybe some Horned Rabbits.