If you have had a bad day, are thoroughly annoyed with someone or something, or possibly just want to read a great book, then this is the novel for you. The book is great about murder gratification. Person bothers the mc? Not for long.
This book brings a fresh look in the 'new world' genre and I am very much looking forward to see where this novel leads, or at least how it gets there!
absolutely awesome story. ideal protagonist imo. doesn't go out of his way to find trouble but also doesn't go out of his way to leave trouble hanging. still early days (60ish chaps) but story development is good so far without spending too much time on any 1 part of the story. hopefully he continues to get stonger at the same pace
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The book is basically about an MC who is a simp. The abandonment of his humanity to become something rlse.....trust me, it’s not that great. He is just a lovestruck simp
mmmm, a new type of novels, power, love, fight, wars, death i really liked your novel auther and wating more from you, we are all here, so erntren us good heheheh
A very basic story in every sense. There is nothing outstandingly bad but nothing stands out as really good either. it lacks depth(no character building or world building) and progresses from one cliche to the next. After 20 chapters, nothing really interested me enough to continue. Overall, above average for this site but lacked enough appeal for me to continue.
MC is a simp.
Grammar/spelling is terrible.
Novel is extreamly fast paced, It skips over a lot of details.
Nothing really unique about this novel, its pretty much the same, once the MC gets some power it becomes a power reset over and over.
Its pretty clear that the author doesnt have an outline of where to take his novel. its almost as if he wakes up in the morning and decides to go in a different direction everyday.
Writing quality is bad, very simple sentences with a good amount of mistakes. I am unable to even care about the story as every sentence is hurting my brain while trying to correct it.
Overall I'm only reading this because I'm bored. The writing itself is passable however the story lacks depth (Description of the surroundings/world and the character himself) its literally Ayaan does that and this theres no background what so ever.
Although I said the english is passable, would be nice to have the author or an editor to recheck the chapters and make it more smoothly.
Only read 30 chapters so far, but it's a brainless read for me.
It looked like it might have been a bit interesting.
Until I actually started to read it.
The sentence formation, the grammar is all not up to par.
Needs a lot of improvement.
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it's an overall good book but the development if too fast. The world background is kind of lacking although it's still new I guess in the near future this would be fixed. Keep up the Good Work!
