It’ sure that’s you make a lot of mistakes and typo but the story is still interesting, I like your style and I hope you’ll try to find a way to settle those insignificant issues, keep continue and I don’t you’re keeping me waiting til I finish those chapters to upload others… you god me hooked already and be careful with the remaining chapters good job.
"Okay, relax everyone, I got this," Nichiren said, sliding to his sensei on his knees and grabbing his first aid kit. His hands were glowing with healing chakra as he pressed it to his sensei's wounds. "Sensei, just try to relax."
"Bing bong! You're right!" I smiled a bit. "What!? weapon? You mean rifle!? There are rifles in this place? In Asylum!?" Roger looks surprised to heard that, even after we almost get killed by electric chair in this place.
