Heart Ablaze - Reviews

interesting to read thought it's too long

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A very good novel if your like me and like copy novels.NEEDS MORE UPDATES                                                                                                                                                              

Perfect for the sister fetishes out there. Actually really great. I do worry though that it will be less focused on his sister and include more with other girls which I personally don’t want to see

Can people stop puting random reviews. I want actual reviews that help new readers to my novel decide if they want to read. If you havnt read but put a review i will delete. if you put good or random letters i will delete. I want why you like it and what you dislike and where it can be improved.PLEASE KEEP CONSTRUCTIVE

I enjoy reading kingdom building novels and if I am fortunate to stumble across one I will try and give it a go and hope for something of merit. Sadly this one disappoints. It is a mishmash of tropes and ideas thrown into a basket and hopefully from that conglomerate something good is revealed. The MC is basically some ex librarian who is reborn with the title of king. He discovers he has access to technology from this mysterious book he can see with his minds eye. So begins to the story of a king trying to drag his kingdom out of the mud.So far this really reads badly, many grammar and spelling mistakes not attended to, vague reassurances of getting around to it one day, which shows less pride in the authors work. MC is rather shallow and mediocre in anything of note. I read references to his emaciated form which he hasn’t considered that he needs a new mind set to reflect a better person. His character is rather boring as he eyes off various women and is enthralled by his chief knight who I think was said to be 15 which was rather interesting to how she got that position at that age. He is betrothed or married to some younger Princess from another country and he still accepts sleeping on the floor. For one he could have taken a number of paths, one being my bed im sleeping here you can sleep where you want, two could be on the floor showing a subservient response, or finally sleep in another room. I am just not impressed with the MC at all to date.There are many glaring issues that should be addressed but after 60 odd chapters, I couldnt stomach it any more and chose to drop this.Needs far more research and perhaps reading of other similar novels to gain a better understanding. The approach seemed good but died after a while.

Elmer-sama seems to be fine eventhough the volume in the nursing bottle clearly decreased.

Awakening was a strange phenomenon. It starts taking place at around 4 am when the spirit energy in the world is at peak. At start it is barely noticeable, but at around noon it picks ups pace. By noon, the foundations for evolution are established, once those are established, the body and the world work together to complete the process of Awakening, this causes immense pain to the body and the soul. Due to existence of Awakening, age of a person is not determined from his date of birth, but instead from the day of Awakening. After all, awakening is a sort of rebirth.

Skills:-

Daryl: Yes

tsundere wife get huh? *nods*