A better novel than most on this site but still gravely lacking:1) Story proceeds at a snail pace, there are so many filler chapters (with the main character reaching the first level of cultivation at chapter 190)2) The main character becomes progressively unlikeable (starts betraying his own race because he loves an alien girl)3) Half the chapters are romance, I did not come here to read a romance story.4) Cultivation levels are clear but applications of mana are confusing, there is new entire systems of utilisation getting thrown to the reader at random with massive info dumps and repetitions.Grammar is good but the story is so slow I can't recommend this to anyone. From chapter 100 to 200 there has barely been any development.