Hallowed Be Thy Ashes - Reviews

Hello, loves! I have uploaded different content in two of my chapters (The file and disastrous and stressful) instead of the real content, I have added the actual content there. it just need the approval of the editor. when it's approved, you can read it again and it won't cost you any money.

Lovely enjoyed reading!

i found it on scribble, but here have more chapter than there is there any different? and in there it have a good rating so i give you same too and change it accordingly after i read few chapter

Grammar and Story telling are garbage. I couldn't even manage to force myself to read till chapter 20. The thing about story telling though, what the f**k happened to the dude who crippled the MC on live television. He get arrested? Fined? Nothing at all, really?

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Can anyone with a good heart tell me the raw of this novel???________________________________________________________________________________

The premise is well thought of and the characters emotions are portrayed in a genuine way.Aside from some minor grammatical errors, this is a gem in the making.Well done and write on.

    "N-no, I was wondering about how you managed to do that all by yourself. Also, I saw someone do the impossible. How can I do that?"

A minute later, both Erevan and FTL came out of their room, dressed. FTL's pistol was on his belt, and he bore an unusually serious face. The Alfan had a sword hanging off his hip.

"Huwag kang magsasalita. Huwag kang gagalaw."

"About leaving this world," Leone snuggled up against Sinbad. Sinbad wrapped his arm around her not turning to look.

8 Gate lv: 18