A newbie huh... don't worry, you will learn with time, and if one of the easiest way is to get rid of all your thoughts, don't stop reading at a certain point, if you want to do it at the end of a chapter and do not go back ?
Storyline is really good. It can get confusing at certain points then if all goes up towards the end but all in all it’s worth reading. Also the grammar is off so be patient. Good job author!!
Maybe Jayden is the one to blame for trashing Ava's apartment. Getting the room ready in a few hours? New clothes for Ava bought several days ago?... I don't know, this looks fishy.