Guardian of the Origins - Reviews

Guardian of the Origins
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This story follows the Main Character(MC) who prepared for a zombie apocalypse by building a shelter, and how he leads survivors. The entire story focuses entirely on the MC, and how he would act.The MC is prepared and appears to adapt well and is strong, but is not without flaws. Side characters are not all yes-men, and tend to have their own preferences. This story was refreshing to read, and at time of posting was updated 2 chapters a day.
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To be honest I dont really like reading novels but I need so much more from this one
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Reading this was horrid. Just past the paywall (which is only 6 chapters deep btw) which it is a tough chliched 6 chapters, he sets up a horrid scenario with no thought behind it where a girl has to pay 50k (which they cant afford) or be r'd. disgusting. on top of that, the mc bails them out in exchange for sleeping with them and then tries to play the moral high ground. Written poorly, from a vile author.
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Anyone expecting an MC going on an journey where the mc's only love is his sword? Woo**, you won't find any love here. You will, however, despite the authors protest, find a lot of kinship! The mc will turn into an self-righteous piece of sh*t by chapter 134, somehow understanding right and wrong and abandoning all his understanding of the world to pursue an ideal world which can only exist in his heart. Yes, the author actually justifies his actions by blatantly saying the world has to be clean for him to feel at peace. Arrrgh, the mc had such a good premise and the author was still deciding where to take the story before chapter 130~ and i have to say i'm sorely disapointed. I believe the author has experienced some unfairness in the period he wrote these chapters and therefor just went with it. But.. yeah. What really buggles me is that the author had the audacity to name this sh*tty way of thinking some grand name. Fjfbfnfnkf i'm speechless. Still giving great score because the story IS well thought out, character development is good and one of the villains had more than 2 dimensional thinking as of chap 130~, so thats great! Unfortunately the mc's thoughts don't link up well with mine and i get mad whenever i hear his thoughts, so i'm dropping it. Happy reading!
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Somone explain to me whats going on. i have read about 26 chapters and i am confused. So he has memories for a billIon years? From the same world? Then he gains even more memories from multiple past lives from other worlds?
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So the futa thing really turns off lot of people ??.You should add it in tag..... .......................................................
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Nice novel but will likely not be chosen because of ghost and lack of racism.Nice novel but will likely not be chosen because of ghost and lack of racism.
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I have been a good friend for a few days now and I have been trying to get hold on the wings of the hall opened again and the music I have been having to change it to the wrong location as I am now having a few issues to get back to you on the phone with my phone and the music  more I will be able to use the phone or the device you want me on the phone
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Hi this is the author I re upload this novel so I can join the Contest please support me to win the contest I really need the prize money so I can go to college thank you all for your support!!!
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Ah. Honestly, I wasn't going to write a review at first because I directly understood that this novel wasn't going to be for me (I am not into romance). It would be like saying you dislike a horror book because it contains horror. That being said, the writing quality and the magic made me stay (I have an inkling toward mix of technology and magic). What a mistake I have made ?. I won't talk about the amount of sexual related talk that make you wonder if it's actually a magic novel since, again, it was clearly portrayed since the beginning and I knew what awaited me (I wasn't ready for the relationship with his cousin though, like what? Yes I know they are distant family but it's still family...) but the main character... THE MAIN CHARACTER. He discovers he has a magi inheritance in a world where magi are being killed or worse. Yet, the MC shows little to no concerns. You know, I understand that he was forced to follow the rule of the witches. But bro, you could at least show some concern ? You could not instantly trust whoever comes by ? Have some plans ? I am sure he will (I have dropped) but right now, he hasn't shown any... like how ? Also, why is the MC accepting to be used as a battery without any afterthought? Its as if it was the best thing to be a human battery... HOW ?! And then he became a familiar... A FAMILIAR ?! And the worst ? He doesn't show any concerns about becoming a familiar, not even an afterthought. What human being, and I say that in general, would suddenly become a slave and show absolutely no concern? Not even a little bit angry ? Just after he learns that familiars have to sleep with their master. It seems so forced... Like bro, enough, dropped. I am not a romance guy but the very least I know is that romance doesn't imply that the MC is dumb and incoherent.

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