Grievance of the Young Bride - Reviews

IM ONLY ON CHAPTER 654 BUT THIS BOOK IS PRETTY GOOD... I LIKE IT A LOT!! BUT I THINK HE SHOULD BE WITH THAT FANG GIRL FROM HOS CHILDHOOD AS WELL!! AND WHAT IS UP WITH THE EGG??? ITS LIKE ITS NOT IN THE BOOK ANYMORE!

Really bad discount Budda PalmMC supposedly transmigrated, but has no motivations at all. He acts and thinks like he is on a holiday trip, he also just knows things and has things just on hand whenever it is convenient for the story.

Even though I’m a wow fan, it doesn’t look like to be that good... I might give it a shot later but too much fan fiction. I can’t blame people for being upset over this

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Why do you keep changing the objectives? None of your Character's objectives are really finished or even started. It is like you are a cook making cake. Then quarter way through making it. You throw it out the window. Now you start cooking steak and again you throw it out before we (the readers) even had a chance to smell the steak or even hear it been put in the pan. Neither the cake ingredients nor the steak was bad. They had potential but you threw away. Why?

Let’s get it. Lots of cool stories this time, though. Hope this gets picked.                                                               

Currently  completed till chapter 400 and I just can't stop myself to give a review . I regret that I found such a amazing character like Nan Hua so late but also sad that I will soon be covering till present chapter and torture myself while waiting  for updates soon ?. Our FL is everything I love in a female lead . How can u not adore her ! ? And the siblings love for each other warms my heart. The characters development were gradual and I m seriously liking how slowly their progress is described . The world building is very detailed . Writing quality too is great. Novel's Plot is interesting.  Especially love the War and politics elements added here.Nan Hua honestly is one of my favorite patroganist. she got brains , she is smart , kind and cute with her thoughts too. ML I don't have much opinion yet , calm ,cool , collected,  smiling tiger. He pass as a classic smiling villian for ppl he hate .

it's good..............................

Egon looked at the unconscious Prime, he then looked at the siren's head. A bitter smile crept up his face as he whispered, "Lady, the war already began the moment they shed our blood, noticing Prime just added to this blood debt..."

Then I remember that he will find out what I am soon. Whitout saying something I went to my room. I was afraid because maybe he won't be my friend. I go to sleep and try to forget the stupid ideas.

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(Originally published in Eureka Studies in Teaching Short Fiction 2:1 (Fall 2001) Ed. Loren Logsdon)