Gravitational Shadow - Reviews

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Recommended by someone, I started reading this just to pass some time. It’s actually a prologue to another novel. The story started off nicely. The flow was quite fast-paced, which is also a plus. Words chosen aren’t too difficult to understand either even if you’re a beginner to the English languge. The characters need a bit more of an in depth descriptions though, such as skin color, height, maybe eye color.Keep up the great work

"Silk and I are going to look for an inn, Benji and Bai are going to check the details for the auction and Shaya and Malia are going will do recon to find out who's arrived so far.

"Who are you, seriously I don't remember meeting you at all."

"I don't eat street food the last time I ate it upset my stomach!" I worriedly said.

Once we've arrived, he paid the driver and carried the two bags again.

     "Good, now to let everything fall into place."

  Duduk santai diatas tikar pantai. Sehun mengeluarkan semua makanan dan minuman yang sudah ia siapkan. Semua isi keranjang sudah ia keluarkan. Lalu menatap gadis itu. Yoona terlihat tidak tertarik. Ia malah menyuruhnya memasukkan kembali semuanya kedalam keranjang.

"Kau mau bekerja lagi?" tanya ibu Sehun ke Yoona yang sedang memakai sepatunya.

Just as this thought entered Cloudhawk's mind, a savage and ferocious black figure suddenly roared and charged straight towards him. It moved with incredible speed! It was so fast that Cloudhawk wasn't even able to see the creature clearly. All Cloudhawk could tell was that it looked like an enormous beast. The creature knocked Cloudhawk to the ground, towering over him. The creature emanated a horrifying, nauseating stench, and it began to bite downwards towards Cloudhawk's neck with its long, savage teeth.

"MOTHER WE'RE ALREADY LATE WE HAVE TO GOOO!" He shouts after remembering their predicament