The story's main narrative is quite comprehensible, allowing me to read ahead. Overall, it's not a bad story, but there are a few areas where I believe the author could allocate more attention.
Regarding the main character's (MC) age discrepancy, the author seems to have a inconsistencies. Since people in the story's future are typically considered adults at 25, it's odd that the MC, being 23, is still regarded as a minor. The male lead (ML), claiming to be 92 (though we're unsure if that's his real age), tries to justify the age difference by comparing it to historical practices where 18-year-olds were considered adults. However, this analogy doesn't hold water; just because it was once acceptable doesn't mean it's appropriate in the current context.
The ML's behavior towards the MC also raises concerns. He keeps important information from him and even resorts to physical discipline, treating him like a child. This dynamic, where the ML both sees and treats the MC as a minor while harboring romantic intentions, creates a highly uncomfortable situation. It's important to establish clear boundaries and respect the MC's maturity, especially since he is legally an adult in the story's world.
