God's System - Reviews

Ummmmm Allow me to help you people that are freaking out because this is a system book and are considering reading this
1. The plot seems to move as fast as sonic on roids.
2. The updates - I haven't seen another chapter in the last month and I don't think we will receive any more.
3. So far, the characters seem to have little to no personality to them. They are just there to be there
4. The translation is not horrible but it's pretty bad

I really don't care if you listen to my review. I'm just bored so I just decided to write a review about this book. Go ahead and see for yourself if you enjoy it

please update more. i like this book.>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

5 Stars so please update more chapters

I've only rated this on the writing quality; I can't rate anything else since the story is unreadable. Please please please fix your formatting. Almost every word is capitalised, and there's a lot of weird spacing.
Honestly, I wish you luck with your writing, and if you fix this stuff, I'll give the story a try

"God's Hint.`you stupid brat. I gave you the reward, don't lose me face and Reach Earth immortal as fast as possible, or else. Humph, This Goddess will Torture you`."

Damn this goddess is awesome.

Although the formatting is not perfect so far I love the way the story is progressing  and the lack of typos.                                                                                                                            Bn.                  















B

The beginning is a little confusing and the grammar and punctuation is really bad.this story has potential to be great but a proof reader is needed.

I like the MC and most of the side characters as well, so dont stop this story, I hope for more chapters.the only problem is that few chcapters, please update more.

I quite like the plot, and the idea behind it.
The only drawn is the writing quality, if you could change that I don't mind giving a higher rating...

The writing is so unbearable to read but no offense. Please rewrite the story to a more readable format so that other readers can understand what you are trying to convey.

Fellow Daoist, you need to read a few popular chinese, japanese or korean novels with a good english translation to help you with your trouble about english things, my english is bad too.
Good luck and keep learning.

Well, i think its better than your other book the book called `Reincarnation of the Human Empyrean` this book is awesome hope you update more i'm tuned.

Don't stop the story, I need moaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar Chapters LOL, I cant wait.this story is good everyone please give it a try.