God of Sleep: The Whisper of Slaughter - Reviews

Please comment with An honest Review. I Plan To Write More chapters. This is my first novel so go easy on me. A lot of information would be unlocked upcoming Chapters. Enjoy reading

First, your book title is interesting and makes me want to know what the story is talking and surprisingly the author didn't disappoint me, keep up the Good works.

I am not much a system reader , but after reading this novel.  I feel , like I entered into the different world.
I like this novel...
And I want to continue to read it further...

Very good story, really impressed by the way you explained things. I was really impressed by your writing and absolutely want future updates of this work.

love the story. Even though it's short I love the plot and the way the characters are constructed. Would love to read more of the work so will be waiting for updates.

Very captivating book, the mc is 100% awesome...the writing quality is amazing, a good book i highly recommend it❤️

This is a great book in my opinion, it gives a lot of information and detail to back it up.  I like the way the story starts it has an unusual beginning and it’s pretty creative.  Needs editing, but is a good story.  I would definitely recommend reading you might enjoy it

This was a great novel well told a story that kept me wondering what’s next! Fascinating and mysterious! I would give this book an overall 5 stars ✨ because it was: well written great story, had an interesting character, and was very entertaining! Well done

Great book, great writing and superb character development. This novel is captivating and gripping,  I usually don't read this kind of book, but this one is attention-grabbing, with excellent Idea and plot.

I’m not much of a system reader but this one is really good. I enjoy the plot and I’ll continue reading more when published. Could use some editing but overall good job man!

Story seems super interesting and what makes it better is tha you used POV in a video game genre game! Really curious how will this story continue
Great job author

I'm on chapter 3, and boy is this story doing a number on me. I normally don't read stories involving systems, but this one caught my attention and interest. I like the character and how it started. The descriptions and the characters feel real. The world is very well constructed, you deserve five stars for that! And your stability of updates, you gotta teach me how to update like that man!

My only complaint is, the grammar and the punctuation. It's good but it can always be better. And be sure to capitalize the start of every line!