God of music - Reviews

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MADE YOU LOOK

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Se ve bien.
La historia tiene potencial.
No puedo esperar para leer más.

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you have potential
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it would  be really cool I you us the song  strawberry cake by xdinary heroes  the have the same theme your going  and the chapter it can be about he bad ex girlfriend who found out he was becoming famous and then he released that song