This is a beautiful story. The science experiment story is beautiful. The beginning is filled with suspense, wanting to know the full story. The characters are also easy to remember. I’m really interested in reading the rest of the story. I’ll encourage maintaining the strength of characters
Normally novels have at least one redeeming feature that keeps you reading.This novel however? Lacks in everything. World building. Protagonist. Characterisation. Narrative. Translation quality. So what do we? Just don't read - it's not hard. Click back and never look 'back'!
Honestly the story is full of plot holes, but i loved it. I didn't like the ending though. Well it's good enough for a first work. I hope there was more action in all the individual worlds. Sure hope the author's next work is even better than this.
Tbh writing quality is ****e why the hell do you use "her" with a male an culture method? And again sorry to be blunt the story has great potential but no matter how good the plot is or other things About it in generel it will be ****e with bad grammar
Ok, so the synopsis itself is eye-catching and attracted me to the story. The grammar is fine and well written, I await how the story will turn out to be!!!
The book was very nice even though its only the first chapter. Yes, i loved the part where he thought his friends were a bunch of frogs ? ???. I can’t say that the plot isn't good but it needs polish.
I accidentally picked up this novel to read not expecting anything much. The title was so so. The book cover was so so. I WAS SO WRONG. This novel is very well written. The story line is excellent and each chapter leaves you hanging wanting to read more. The author is very talented. This novel is a hidden gem!!!
