Gavin’s Girl - Reviews

Im usualy not a fan of mecha and all that kind of stuff but i have to say that you did a great job, i just love it, one of the best original work i found on this web site, thanks for the good read man ! keep it up !

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in my opinion i believe that this is an awesome story. im currently on chapter 130 and i cant see why the ratings is on 3.8. i mean sure the grammar isnt the best but its not like you have to turn your brain off to read it. the thing it lacks most is the the commas. sometimes its pretty hard to read when theres no seperation and i had to peice some if the words tigether in my mind. anyway im only on chapter 130 and havent read the whole thing hence i cant say anything else other than how its going pretty good so far.

Read this if u want something new..in this novel many things is old which we read in other video games novel but it has my new things also... overall good.much better then other trail video games novel.

Why did u use another account for this novel Author? And anyway its a good Story And Since I Like it Why Not Rate it 5 Stars Like Who Cares About The Reason Anyway

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I like overpowered.But this is... boring.Imagine a machine gun against some sheep. So interesting is this story.If there would happen something interesting, I would read it anyway, but the not just the action, even the story is boring.Do yourself a favor and skip this.Too bad, the title sounded like just my thing :-(

This a really good novelHave a lot of potential ___________________________________________________________________________________________________

The writing is actually good. Just drop in to help support:)......................................................................................................

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Quite rare for me to see female protagonists here and that’s one of the reasons that I like this story. Can someone recommend novels like this with female mc please? Aside from the author ’s stories because I already read those??

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