I wanted to give this a poor review, but it's definitely at least a three star novel. If you don't mind plenty of English errors, though not the most I've ever seen, and the author having no idea how to write dialogue, then it's decent. The characters don't have much depth, it's obviously a wish fulfillment novel, and there's sort of a weak to strong vibe. In a way.The story itself has its unique points and a bit of potential, but I really can't enjoy it. Honestly, the poor writing makes it distasteful, so I automatically feel like every character is less intelligent because their dialogue is grammatically incorrect. Author obviously isn't using spellcheck despite it being free in multiple programs.The author has dreams, and the courage to act on them, but not the care to see that everything is written properly. I mean, he hasn't even Googled how to write dialogue, or learned by example from literally any book that isn't a play. Don't understand how that's possible, but, I'd be willing to revisit this review if some improvement was made.
