Game Lord's Cultivation System - Reviews

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Good story, good plot, some inconsistencies, ruined because you thought everyone would understand why you do and progress the plot like that (reason and lore) but they skim read

I really tried to sit here and give the book a chance like the chara is really lame but it’s easy to ignore how he acts, I just can’t continue after his comments about the type of servants he will be having like really it’s annoying when they are just surrounded by straight women.

i only write reviews when i am really happy or extremely frustrated and annoyed, unfortunately this time it is the second one.
I was enjoying this novel,.
there were many annoying points but it was okay, In my eyes it was an above average novel, but after the introduction of Qi Shan, it just became worse, it was annoying, i feel it was trying to be funny, but it was just making my mood worse, i think i understand little what the author wanted to do, but i think he had failed miserably which makes it more annoying, do i recommend it, if you can stand a character who is annoying to the core because of her past and will have redemption arc or something like that, then go ahead and if u can't then, don't read it,

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[Reviewed on: 06-03-2022]
[Reading status: 8th chapter]

[Strength: Face slapping, strong character development, fusion of two genres]
[Weakness: Well, according to me, it's super cliche cultivation novel]

- The title says it all, literally half of the expected plotline.
- A possibly weak-to-strong MC
- Cliche cultivation settings and world
- Magic, pills, martial arts are an expected part along with explicit scenes
- A lot of girls, cultivation, energy and the goal to get stronger
- However I personally felt that the initial chapters had nothing different to offer. It followed traditional formation and plot to set the ground.
- In the midst of ocean of eastern cultivation books what this one has to offer? The NPC theme from prior life seemed to be faded after transmigration, diverting back to old cliche plot.

If you're interested in eastern cultivation then this is for you.

[Additional remarks]
The author has improved visibly compared to his previous books.
The flow and pace is good, every scene execution is done wonderfully
Talking about grammar and stuff, don't worry over that.

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this review is just for qi shan...I don't know what was author thinking but this forced comedy ruined everything.

If you are not confident in a thing...dont do it because it ruins the fun. I thought mc was ruthless and wasn't someone who forgets to take revenge but nvm, when he had the change to take revenge on qi shan of 2 years of torture, she had done on the mc...what did he do? he behaved like a scardy cat even after system slave master contract. qi shan even said that she cant disobey his commands...oof so disappointing.

I am sorry author but after the addition of the Qi shan, the story became irritating to read and after investing so much time and keys into the chapter, I am meeting with this disappointment. I even waited that maybe the character is only irritating at the start but oh man even after 10 chapter, she and mc is as irritating as ever. And because of Qi shan, Mc's interactions with other characters like house spirit or his teacher is also getting irritating and cringy, sorry but I don't it was a nice idea to add Qi shan here.

The reviews all looked good but the story just seems like super generic face slapping situations and a protagonist that walks around like he is god amongst men.

Might end up better later, but for now seems cliche and generic

Haven’t written a review in a while but after getting introduced to qi shan I just can’t keep reading. My soul hurts reading about her interactions with mc and her effect on him and how the story has shifted. I honestly don’t know how they will redeem her I doubt they can. Even if they did I don’t think I care anymore. I am just left with massive disappointment and regret on starting this story since it was so promising.

This MC is exceptionally arrogant and insecure, he truly has little redeeming qualities.                                                                                                                                          .