Gacha to Live: Make Gacha, Not War - Reviews

such a wonderful story to follow..im lookinh forward for Hendersons Story, Blancos 2nd mate/love as well as the rest of Chasias Brothers..

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It begins as it is told in the synopsis, the MC is an average normal type half psychopath and the heroin? She is involved in the whole mess because she is curious and thus they are related until a rare romance is created, like the stockholm syndrome, if you continue reading the novel you will understand what I say, I thought it was going to develop differently when I read the synopsis, but as far as I've read I think it's fine, it's not one of the best novels I've read but it's good and leaves me with intrigue since I don't have the fast pass

Wow, I'm blown away. I couldn't put it down! From the first chapter, it captivated me. It's we'll written, and the mystery is enticing. I'd recommend this to any mystery fan!

hmmm.. so he is Lord Turtle sounds good novel to me????????????????????????????????????????????????????

What do you think?The guy tried nine times, each time he had a full year to prepare, Would going back in time really change anything?He may be able to win the first time because he knows the competitions game better than they know themselves, assuming he's smart enough to remember, but after that?

This is a good system novel, author, really great world background and character design. I feel that you put great thought into the world building and the descriptions, and I, as a reader, feel grateful for that. Love the funny dialogues and fights with Hannah. I want to read more of that. The ML has a strong personality and I like how cool he voices his thoughts. Definitely a great Job, author!?

This is seriously great. I like the way you manage to show Kye's sadness and anger, as well as how you introduce the universe. Everything is fluid and didn't disturb my reading time. Let's see what you will write later

There is a lot to say about this novel. Think the author don't have a lot of experience writing novel. So, I'm going to make it my job to comment as much as I can on the mistakes he makes. The story: The story development is kind of too fast. 50 chapters in, and he seems like he's unbeatable. Also, what kind of bs is this when the mc asked for the mysterious orbs from the auction boss and the boss agreed just because the mc won the stare-down. Isn't the mc suppose to be grateful that he is saved by the boss?Character design: The characters are fine, no problems with it. Just not that great enough to get a five star. World Background: ...Seriously, author? So far, I have not seen any explanation about the levels and the power catalogs and stuff like that. There should be like, Level 1-10, regular human stats to Olympic champions stats. Level 20-30, surpass human limits. So on, so forth. After reading a lot of chapters, I didn't get any in depth information about the worlds and people's abilities. Not trying to roast the author or criticize on no bases, just trying to give some constructive criticism to the author.

Hello all!As you can probably tell, I am the author of the Perfect Specimen. After getting my feet wet by writing over 15 chapters so far I realize how fun it can be creating a world and letting others explore it with me! I have many more novel ideas in mind but I'm trying to find my writing style so please if there are any critiques you have let me know! I don't have a glass heart and I will keep writing with all negative and positive comments in mind!Granted I would prefer the positive ones more!Hope you enjoy my novel, but most of all, thank you for giving it and me a chance!

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After changing clothes and eating lunch he went to the college library. He was unfamiliar with this place so he had to learn more about this place from the library.