Frosty feathers of heart & A touch that ignite - Reviews

Thank you for the update what a cliffhanger the end of the last chapter...really anxious for the next update.

Just why, dis story was jit’s Complerely ruined ntrEd more times than one can count but you the make the Mac Stay with the girl……what only of it wasn’t Like dis I would have kept reading                           

One of the better ones on webnovel. It's a mystery to me why is it that it's not that popular. So far, everything is 5stars. Keep up the good work, author!

very interesting and unique book. I like the system which is simple and the cultivation stuff are easy to understand. overall 10/10 story... keep up the great work.

a fun read !.........................................................................................................................

Wow! I an in love with this novel. The story and plot development is awsome. The world background is also thrilling and unique. keep up the good work

learn to write well b4 you translate, the grammar is annoying................................................................................

Fun and exciting read with an equally fun and exciting protagonist. Zack is entertaining at times as well as being a badass. He's also different in character, and his role within the story is vastly different from what I often see in novels around Webnovel. I appreciate the balance between the text that shows game elements and the story paragraphs. Everything is easy to read. I have yet to see more about the world, but I think there would be more to show in the future. Looking forward to more chapters.

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All those tears my eyes want to shed dried. That stinging pain on my chest forgotten. The drama I was executing came to a stop.

Why do you call me master? He asked.

"We have a buffon in an armor, ha ha ha" the leader face turned serious "Listen you sh*t, We rather not kill you, but we will do so if you really choose to fight us, and we will get the kid as well if you dont do as I said, now" The one with the dagger and pick axe were now at the left side of their leader.