From Player To Npc - Reviews

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Great story I really suggest you give it a read. at least the first chapter. pretty please

The story is interesting!
A 5 stars rating for all from me for all your efforts!
Thank you for continuously improving it! I hope to read more of it!

Cheers!

i was curious about this book at first, but my curiousity died quickly because of the extremely poor grammer. the spelling is fine. but the sentence structure is awful. please get an editor to help you streamline a sentence, so that is isnt so cluncky.

Applause! An inspired author with great imagination!
Simple, straight forward and creative. If I may, here is just a suggestion, more dialogues to keep the story more interesting! :)

I only have one word for this novel, one word only. Are you curious about my one word too? Why so curious? Stop reading to find out my one word man. Omg, please stop being so curious. Curiosity will kill the cat, don't you know this.
Fine, seeing how you're so desperate to know my one word.

It's collection.
What collection? Obviously add it to your library fool.

Interesting Idea I look forward to more content so I can give a more in depth review. Thanks to the author for sharing your story!!!!!!!!!!!

good story for some, but a big no for me,
there is no logic, a boy asleep for 9 years knows a lot of information, dad don't question his abilities, personally I don't recommend this book, when I read the synopsis it give me a high hopes for a good novel, pure torture reading 26 chapters.

First: Good story, it is certainly interesting, and really great.
Second: THE MAIN POINT - FIX YOUR GRAMMER PLEASE!!!

Seriously, this book is amazing, and its story is currently rivaled by your terrible grammar in the first few chapters that I have read so far. I look forward to reading more, but please it is as though I am reading a puzzle in many points and cannot figure out what is going on.

Temporary 5 while I give it a read, the bio and author comment gives me alot of hope though!!
















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This story seems really god the man character is interesting (although did you mean for him to seem so sociopathic in the early chapters? I mean he says hes okay with being an npc because he was getting bored) but more than that, please god run the early chapters through grammerly or a read-to-text or something cause this story is great but my god i actually can’t understand what you mean in some of the paragraphs without like 10 careful rereads