a waste of potential it could've been so much more but it's horrid the concept was nice but a merit system?! this is cliche af and frankly i would prefer the mc was evil heck i'd even be fine with good disciples and bad masteroverall rating: not worth my time
The plot was a bit common with the same orphan thing in the starting but still, you did your best to make it different from others. The book is still in its starting stage so I can't say much about it but I bet its a promising novel.so keep it up and sorry for the late review.
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I recommend trying this novel. It is well written with good grammer and no grammatical mistakes I can easily spot out.The world background is described vividly and fits so well into the story. the Main Character can seem immature at times but considering his age it's 100% valid and not out of place. it's a slow progress in the main Characters growth but nothing to put anyone off in reading the novel. All side characters shows Character growth and are not there only to boost up the main characters image or strength. This shows the Author put serious work and thought into his novel.This novels update stability is excellent easily earning a 5/5 from me. Each chapter released building on from the past and now having any plot holes even with the fast releases.Like I said originally I recommend you give this novel a try as it takes a different approach to young master novels. The mc isn't weak or ridiculed at the beginning of the novel with him having to grow stronger to prove himself. It's more relaxing and enjoyable. one of the reasons I really enjoy reading this hidden gem ?. Keep it up Author-san ?
However, an enemy of Way who was an Emperor, but broke through to Saint realm wanted to take revenge, and that enemy found out the connections between them and Way so, he hunted Way friends down.
