Free: Otherworldly Adventure - Reviews

I have come to a decision that I will drop this novel,
Cuz I do not see anyone actually reading it and The current situation in my life not going well.
I don't know if anyone will read this but if anyone does someday, I have one thing to say.
Thank you for at least checking my trashy novel. I am gonna write a new one, that can quench the thirst of WN general audiences.
I will drop 8 more chapters for 4 days. After that Bye.
And Thank you to the ones who actually stick with me(If I had one).
BYE

I guess I have finally dropped this. Thanks for sticking with me.

But.
If you want to see this story continued you know what needs to happen and I know that won't happen as the WN general audience's taste is... what can I say more refined..huh.
Thank you one last time.

hey man I have read such a good story in a very long time






I hope you can publish more of it. And never stop.






It has such a great potential

This is very nice, everything is written nicely and fleshed out well.                                      Cant wait to see more of it and definitely adding it to my library

The strengths:
It has good plotting that was carefully made and its pacing is fine too. It has good interactions and also dialogues. Writing quality is also there and has lots of potential.
Weakness:
Some paragraphs needed some trimming as they were too long. The author also needs to improve the vocabulary or choice of words. Flow also sometimes stuttery.
Well best of luck! And happy writing! The best is yet to come and the author has a lot more to offer! [img=recommend]

The story was quite good I like how he picked up his life...there is so much to learn in this story. it's a must-read.

l like the Leon character a lot.

keep it up, dear.....

Wow. It is such a nice story. Every character has their own personality.


They don't feel forced. Didn't have a lot of fights but I can see every fight may be meaningful in the future.

I need more chapters.

hello just me shifter here giving this novel a 10/10 AS I ALWAYS DO I THE ARCHITECT SHALL JUDGE THIS NOVEL WHEN I READ IT BE.AFRAID.OF.ME

I am new here so I would like to say as my first few stories I like it very much.
Loved how the author brought so many twists and turns only in the arc.
The second arc is about to finish and I can't wait for the next arc.

Eh.. I guess the story is nice? This is the author’s first time writing, I guess. There are a lot of beginner mistakes but he seems to want to improve and learn so I think people should give him a try and help whenever they can. One meaningful comment can help. But, since I know how people are here, I doubt I’ll see a lot of that. It will probably be hate and condemnation. But, at least some people who like this novel will try and help the author. I wish him luck. I didn’t read a lot so this could be counted as a spam review since I didn’t say anything meaningful.

This story feels generic, and the story so far is cliche. However, cliche isn't necessarily bad. So far, the plot reads like most fantasy isekai. Same tropes that can be found in stories like this.

The main characters and world are nothing to write home about, but I'm sure with enough time they will develop.

However, I appreciate the fact that its LitRPG element isn't too prevalent like many other stories and their "systems". Those can be jarring for the readers, reading numbers upon numbers between paragraphs. The pacing is decent thay it is not too slow nor too fast; just right for this kind of story.

There are many minor grammar mistakes, such as lack of periods in some sentences and some non-noun words that are capitalized. I dislike the use of omatopoeias in between paragraphs, but it is my personal preference more than anything. Word choice and descriptions leads to be desired.

I also applaud the story's constant and stable updates, which keeps the story alive.

However, with enough time, I think this story will improve.

For someone without writing experience you did great. Am able to understand everything.
Leon's life is quite sad and I wonder what will happen to him in the future