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Great story so far! Love the characters and the concept. The only complaint I have is the amount of chapters(I NEED MORE!!! Lol) keep up the great work!
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Ditto- Overall there is context behind but lacks a certain smooth flow in the storyline. Alternatingly between passive and active sentence is make it a little but difficult to read.
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Legitimately one of the worst things I've ever read. The author constantly messes up their own numbers, changing the ranks of things willy nilly.The story was supposed to be about alchemy, but the author quickly makes the MC perfect at literally everything. Magic, strength, alchemy.The author constantly hammers in how hard it is to fight above your level, yet the MC's alchemical creatures are consistently able to fight 1-2 levels above themselves with extreme ease. Adding on to this, the MC makes a potion to make himself a 3-star expert, but is able to overpower a 5-star expert. How? Bad writing, that's how.Why is it so easy to obtain legendary alchemy materials? Everybody and their grandmothers seem to have a least tier 6 alchemy materials. The materials always have some sort of mythical story behind it, but then the MC magically has 5 more. It's ridiculous.Everything is constantly measured in the cost of gold coins, despite how very very obvious it is that the monetary system is completely made up and the numbers thrown around are entirely random.I'm angry I've wasted any iota of my time on this sack of actual rotting garbage.
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Just wanted to say I voted for Gaara, not the synopsis. I mean really, what can we tell from that thing. For all I know, he was a demon accidentally summoned to earth from another world and his ambitions are to develop the world's most popular cafe. Well, Daoist Jie cleared things up already, but still - 3-
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Okay. I like the story so far. Honestly there’s nothing bad I can say about the story so far. I personally enjoy stories that take place within VR or deep-dive games. The grammar is good. It’s early so I can’t say too much about plot.Overall I rate the novel a 5 stars.
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The first thing that quip my interest was the character name. Then as I start reading… o my gush! I ain’t exaggerating but I feel more and more in love with the character   The writing style is just so perfect. Character descriptions are excellent and then the intriguing storyline?
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the story line is good but fewer chapters and chapters upload very less?
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- "If you want it... I suggest you stop wasting yur energy in useless moves"- replied Skywalker and managed to parry two attacks of the Kinghts of Ren to immediately kick one of them and hit the shoulder of the other with a powerful blow that broke the armor and sent the knight of Ren against the wall.
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"Rafe, can I sit beside Belle?" Rex glared.
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Aside from finding a secluded ground, Elias also ordered the kids to find a bucket of water, a wooden block, a small knife, and a pile of dirt. He also had a small bonfire started. After that, they arranged these five things in a circle.
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Everyone loves him because he is so beautiful. He is full of charisma and a perfect husband material.
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That was exactly their current dilemma.

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