Fragments Of Truth - Reviews

excellent!

Start of story is quite good. last 300 chapters are quite interesting

A good story but the editing, grammer and translation are absolutely terrible and make it so frustrating to read.

Why is no one reviewing this. The story is really good(although the mc isn t really evil and i like really evil mcs). But i don t mind this  mc since he doesn t lower his head only to his parents which i find normal. He is a chad and is no a simp( simps should bury their heads in the dirt and not come out).my point is this needs mire attention because its really good

So far its got an interesting direction and, plot developments, characters interactions and overall world building elements. Let us see how it progresses

Great work on your book, can't wait to catch up to the latest chapters

By the time we left the museum, it was already 6 p.m. They went to the nearest restaurant to grab a bite as they both were very hungry. After eating, they roamed in the streets for a while and then went back to the hotel.

Actual it was said in the user manual, after user wear the helmet system will scan his body and nerve system in order to set the movement parameters inside of the game.After finish the scan system will force the user to sleep.

Inside the cell was a middle-aged man with black hair and gray eyes, with a rough height of 6'3'' He was dressed in a dark green uniform, a helmet sitting at his side.

that man was Jason

I'm writing a review only for support.           Thanks to the author for his work, I would like more chapters and I ask the author not to repeat the same information 10 times in a row, it’s annoying  a a aa. A a a a a a a. A a a a a a a a a a a.  A a a a a a a. A a a a a a. A a a a. A a a a a a. A.  A a a a. A a a. Aa. Aa a. A aa. A. A a a a a a a. A a a a a a a a a. A a a.  A a a a a   

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