FRAGMENTED SYSTEM CORE - Reviews

amazing story, the spacing is a little off nd just needs a little editing, except from that, the book is great

People who like this must have be braindead. I can't fathom how people can like this **** ..........................................****tttttttt

Kiba is perhaps the greatest harem mc out there! yes i even put him above konrad!his sassiness, his flirty ways, him going around cucking dudes , his shamelessness! and boy is he smooth!you are tired of all those r18 and harem stories where the mc don't do any effort to get the women in bed? you tired of reading about them using their stupid system and aphrodisiac scent to turn women into lusty sluts?well look no further this is the book you are looking for!kiba is smooth! knows how to flirt! and he does not need no system or incubus powers to get a woman under him and that alone makes this story a MUST READ!

This shiuld definitely become a full novel from just how good the grammer to word play they use and alot better compared to some novels on the trial read stage

Fucking great novel. no boring tropes amazing world building only complain is the way side characters are used. The story follows a ****** but interesting path which allows you to remember improper moments or characters from back when. The cultivation system is not heavily focused on on a good way since it allows more interesting storyline instead of the generic repitition of how oh I just broke through now you will be doomed

This should be called "Journey to become a true Translator" Or something along those lines. I read machine translated stuff all the time so me being bored and having enough time on my hands i gave this a read. I found a lot of this stuff to be extremely funny, so if you read it while thinking this isn't a serious novel then it's actually hilarious...But on that note plot is pretty much one bunch of cliches smashed together, i mean it's not bad to be honest but if you're not looking for this type of story then it definitely won't appeal to you.My views on novels on this site is pretty simple, give me an OP MC and a some Romance (doesn't need to be harem) and R-18 tag and ill give it a go.That being said for those of you who are reading this story i tip my imaginary fedora off to you...and if you spent to unlock any chapter on this then let me know where i can send my bank accounts routing information to so you can send me your money since you don't need it.

Same generic plot our MC is trash and a naive idiot. He is betrayed by his girl, and vows revenge. So, if you like this kind of plot then this is for you.

Excellent is the only word to describe It, the story please add more chapters thats the only thing i ask,                                           Please

one thing I hate about action writers is the lack of personality. This is not one if those books. We're not working with Mr. edgy who is too cool and strong. we're looking at pipsqueak start his journey with a colorful cast.

well 1 star since i believe it will become a racist nationalistic novel later on so heed my advice fellow readers don't read the book and waste ur time

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I think deep characters or at least deep character of the MC might have been even thrilling to read but it feels like the characters are not living beings it doesn't feels lively.