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Fragile in His Arms
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kgsslrkudlRJ you can do it though lol you have a lot of we will be working well work now right on the other end or pork even though I was on
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I'm only at chapter 11. Overall it's been alright so far. Don't be tricked by its rating, those are from the bots. It's not bad but not good. I'd give it a 3.5/5. The problem I have with the novel is that it's very vague. There is almost no description of the settings at all. We have no clue what the city looks like or what the mc's workplace looks like. When the mc enter a town, there was no description of what it looked like at all. There is also no backstory of the mc at all. We only know that he came from the earth. Side characters are also very bland. We don't get many interactions between the mc and the side characters. There's also a lot of show, don't tell. An example from the novel is when the mc asked Gu Bo how to tell the difference between beast wounds and corpse puppet wounds, "Starting from a corpse on the far end, Gu Bo pointed at its wound and explained the nuances in a low voice. These were useful and practical knowledge, so Su Jingxing listened closely and memorized everything. When Gu Bo was done explaining, the investigation was still underway". Very lazy writing from the author. Overall, if you're looking to waste your time then this novel's up for that. If you're looking for a quality novel to read then skip this novel. Don't listen to those vague reviewers who give out 4 or 5 stars like it's gold. Unless you're a kid then you probably have no idea how mediocre this novel is.
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Honestly this novel is just trash. It is flawed to the bone and full of plot holes. And what made it worst is that the translators westernized  the story tooI don't recommend reading this.
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FirstEXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXPRead the raws, annoying at the start if you read the rest of RMJI. EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP
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Very nice story, I loved your plot and how you define your characters and your concept of astral realm, I really am looking forward to the progress of this story and keep on the good work.
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Author here, finally decided to start and try making a novel and see how that goesThis is my first "book
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Amazing... the writing is smooth!! how the author Discription is well written and easy to understand. I was hook at the first chapter. The is pacing is good. I could feel Marco pain.
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I stood abrutedly close to the head boy watching him munch on a chicken lap with hunger ravaging my Stomach staring at the second chicken lap in a plate on the table.
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Mr Choi (Minho's uncle) is taking place in Jisoo's own dad's place a the wedding bringing Jisoo to her groom. He is very happy to be seeing these young people fining true love.
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A light shines in my eyes.  Fuck!  I throw my axe at it.  The light pinwheels through the room.  I see men struggling to my left.  Men holding handguns to my right.  The light hits the ground.  Goes out.  I charge right.  Get a hold of someone.  Fight for his gun.  Can't get it.  Fuck!  Fuck!  Wrap an arm around his neck, twist, dive at the floor.  Hit hard, but his skull hits too.  Now I've got his gun.  Give him a bullet.  Another.  Sit up.  Shooters pose.  Fuck.  Still can't see or hear.  The house lights flicker.  Fuck.  I'm facing the wrong way.  I turn.  Stay low.  Lights flicker again.  Everybody's low.  I get ready for the next flicker.  
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The archer in the trees awaited his command. Naruto held his hand into the air. "Wait for my signal. Annie, make sure he doesn't escape," Naruto commanded. Annie gave another grin before she laughed as she skipped towards Mizuki as the man landed to the ground. Iruka just continued to watch, stunned. "Was this summoning from the forbidden scroll? What a strange jutsu," Iruka thought to himself.
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I felt a strange tingle as my own momentum led me through the same space the battle had been in seconds before, and I frowned at a slight discontinuity in the starfield. Suddenly, I had the mother of all headaches and my vision began to darken around the edges.

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