My honest opinion and what I noticed, the story has minimal errors in terms of writing, it doesn't get in the way of reading, the release of a week can bother some, but due to the quality of the story, it's not possible to remove the merit just because of the capitols delay (I prefer quality over quantity). The narrative isn't bad, it's good. And about the story, volume 1 was pretty standard, nothing special that I remember, but volume 2, I thought it was very good, it was wonderful. But as everything that goes up will also have to come down, we arrived at volume 3 which is horrible and dark, not because of the writing but the course that the story took, and instead of the author changing the course he continued, if you don't believe me can you read the comments on the chapters of the third volume, do you want the reasons? The protagonist's behavior becomes irrational and a new character is as useful as Sakura.
People can come and say that volume 3 is to develop the character, yes, but you don't develop a character by irritating your reader, quite the opposite, you have to develop it by making your reader feel empathy for the protagonist and not anger. But it's no use saying that the protagonist had his reasons, the reasons are not clear for several capitolos making their attitudes irrational, doing things that normal people wouldn't do.
