Forsaken Sovereign - Reviews

Novel yang menarik bagiku karena rata" Reinkarnator akan selalu berusaha mengubah semua hal yang akan terjadi namun disini MC tidak terlalu banyak mengubah jalan cerita. Sedikit kurang pada novel ini pada penggunaan kata saja seperti kata "saat" Yang terlalu banyak digunakan

this i bet would be amazing cause i thinks it's about a man treasure           hunting for loot and i bet he has a system and some companion -like monsters by by his side which would be pretty damn cool. also i hope it's not harem or he has a 1-dimensional so called great master teaching him because i want him to be  a lone wolf the whole time because there's alot of mc 's saying they don't want to meddle with other people but then like 20 chaps later he's rolling into every dungeon he goes into with some squad the author put together in like 10 minutes. that just sucks i hope this isn't one of those novels with major cliches with a fresh take on novels like tomb raider and like to see him building confidence to do things like the tomb raider in that one really popular tomb raider series where at first there clumsy < nervous , unconfident and then 100 chaps later they build up confidence which leads to great character development which i would like to see. in other novels here is the only character development.first chap : little level 1 scrub that can be crushed like an ant by any person thats a little pussy and doesn't have a life chap 3 : fearless person who wants to have good life and make their familys life great  etc.chap 100 : MC = Chuck Norris and leroyplease have good character development , that's all i want(plus no 1-d cold side bae + harem) who also has formidable backgroundp.s sorry for massive review

Although writing quality is good, character design is absolutely one dimensional and repetitive. We are not given a proper introduction to the world in which the mc is transmigrating, and the author only uses the lucky draw items as one time props.Not reccomended.

Alright - so having read up to ch 573 thus far I can't not make a review to warn everyone at this point, I'll keep it simple.Up to chapter ~180 the quality of the novel and translation is fine. It was a fun read, nothing too special but not resorting to much of the usual cliches. Up to that point I'd give the story ~4.3 stars.Chapters ~180 to ~350 the story, character and world development take a huge hit. Cliches abound everywhere, MC constantly going from place to place saving **** and people praising the MC way too f'in much for anyone's taste. I'd give the story about 2.8 stars in these chapters.After ch ~350 the translation starts taking a huge hit along with the writing quality taking even bigger hit than before so I'll sum it up like this - This novel is written by an illiterate 12 year old writing his first book and translated by someone who's so f'in bored and tired of this **** that he/she/they seem no better than the author either. I'd not give it any stars if I could honestly. Its complete garbage at this point and if you really have to read it I recommend reading machine translation from start to finish in that case - you'd at least have some semblance of consistency rather than an inconsistent drop in quality of just about everything in this novel.And here's a sum of verbal face-slapping arguments past ch 350:MC: "So you can do that but I can't do that?"Enemy: "My pappy is stronger than your pappy!"MC: "Oh so you can say that but I can't say that?"Enemy: "Omg let's fight to the death!"Nobody:Everyone: "MC is the son of god and he's so amazing and everything he does is so good and amazing and also good and amazing too! Did we forget to mention how good and amazing he is?! Omg let's praise him into the next chapter!11!!!1!!!"

So i don‘t really write rewiews But i need to say this, how Comes that every single review on this novel is good? The Mc is literaly a slave to a girl that abuses Him since the very second, and what does he do? Nothing, he accepts the abuse he accepst that he Is literaly a slave to that girl didn‘t think twice about it, and what I don‘t Understand even more is, why does he call her „Master“?!? She can‘t understand his Words (Nobody can he just groans and we see what he says) and Eventhought that he is calling her „Master“ every single time, doesn‘t matter if she is next to him or if ge is alone, he just goes like „Oh her skill calls me Eternal Servant? Guess I‘m her slave than. What she abuses me and literaly Cut my arm of my body, throwes it away and continue abusing me because I can‘t find it alone? Guess that seems pretty normal I‘m her slave after all“ Ok after that rant, can‘t say much more about it I read the first 6 chapters and skimed throught a couple more just to see if something Changes (Spoiler warning No nothing changes) So maybe some like a slave Mc that gets abused every second of the novel, I don‘t so 1/5 stars Character design, the rest 3/5 Star, can’t say much more about it, because like I said I just Did read 6 chapters and skimed throught a couple more.Is more a warning for the ones that don‘t want to read about a abused slave Mc, that didn‘t have any hope of escape because of the skill From the Female Lead

petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................

Just off of reading that one last line in the description, the novel seems off putting and judging from the other reviews, MC seems like a r***ist.

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I have read the author's previous book, Destiny Forged, and I have to say, I hope this book is on the same level. I hope for a few references between his old book and this one, but other than that, I feel this novel has nothing wrong with it.

Looks like a Triad Mafia Novel, if just based from cover alone..............................................................................................

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"No problem, Josiah, I always like to help." Replied Escanor smugly.