First Valentine - Reviews

Thank you for the story! I read it as a complete translation, so I didn't have to wait for updates - thankfully! because I don't know if I'd be able to wait! Story was great, and also translation was really nicely done!

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This is gonna be my first review after binge reading almost 400 chapters. The writing quality of the story is ok. You’ll find a couple of misspelled words every few chapters but it’s not enough to disrupt the reading. There is not a ton of world building in the beginning but you learn more about the world as the story goes on. There was never a time where it’s a problem. The MC is the only character worth, Cain, mentioning since no other character is really important  is the only character that any significance everyone else show up for at most an arc then is no longer relevant. Which is my one knock real knock on the novel. Not really into novel where the MC is a loner who is destined to be alone. The had the romance tag which I was looking forward to but there’s no real romance in this story maybe only a glorified chapter. The MC is smart and doesn’t make any head scratching decisions so he is hard to like. There is no real character the development with all it is was developing stronger willpower. Final I can’t really speak on the update stability since I just started reading it.

A large crowd was streaming into the halls from the one common door. There were still a few people in the classroom including... one... two... three... four... ten? Ten husks? Minus Kevin makes nine. Right now the husks seem a bit disoriented. Just like with Kevi's pathetic pushup from earlier, the other husks seemed unable to properly use their bodies and we unable to follow the escaping crowd. Didn't stop them from trying however as every one of them still in the room was trying their best to crawl towards people with, I assume, a heartbeat..

Sandersonia: Lets go we don't have all the time in the world.

"Aaaah Iya, terimakasih."

"What're you going to do when she gets married and falls in love?"

Before Raven could respond to Liam, the familiar smell of sea foam and sandalwood wafted past her. She threw up one hand, magic pouring out invisible waves.  "Speak of it and so it shall be…." She rolled her eyes before turning her head toward the door.  "Or some horse shit like that.  Hello Orion, how nice of you to show your face here." Sarcasm oozed out in nearly as strong waves as her magic.

"...What about you?"

kioz:I know, I am tried to not get more attention

I think it is a good book give it a read

it has for sure potential but lets see in the future