I'm on chapter 83 atm I don't have much to say but good things writing quality is top tier. Updates all the time Story is really good character design is top tier the world-building is good too only thing that would make the novel better is some lemons. ;]
So far, I love this book. The only thing I don't like is that you can't view it on Kindle or E_Book. Keep up the good work.Oh... and if the author reads this, someone actually stole your novel and put it up on Amazon. It's down now, just beware.
They took the lift to level 3 and they went to every door to look for Yi Ming. There were 5 doors at every level. They knocked on the first door and went inside to look for him. However, he wasn't in the first house. He wasn't in the 2nd, 3rd and 4th house either. If he stayed at his sister's house to escape, then he should be in the 5th house. They knocked on the door and a lady around her late 30s opened it. "Hello Madam, we are here to look for Yi Ming. Are you his sister?" Policeman 1 asked.
Elder He simply walked into the closet and walked out with a talisman and a purple robe. Meng Hao noticed that the robes signified certain statuses. The Sect Leader was wearing a golden robe, Elder Ning was wearing a red robe, and Elder He was wearing a Blue robe.
Phenelope didn't seem threatened at all. She wasn't flinching, or stepping back, or even raising her own hands in defense. She just stood there, her presence radiating calm, as though she expected something like this to happen.
she could see a sign board stating where she was. It was the main subway station of Hilton city. Beside the name board,she could see the clock indicating the time that it was 6.54 a.m in the morning.
This story made me long for a feeling of brotherhood. You know just being understood at a primal level. Like you know how when we read romances we start to feel the need for romance in our lifes. Stories aren't really able to depict that with friendship.There is a feeling that one protagnist reallly gets the other protagnist. A idealestic depiction of understanding between two people.Not only enjoying each others compaines but struggling to achieve something which matters more than life itself together. the best thing about this story is that protagnists aren't reactionary. They work together for there own ambition not because something forces them to do that.How many stories have people leaving friends and family to achieve there dreams instead of going along passively with the plot because someone stole your mc guffin .read it because there is no better feeling than having ambition for something at any cost and having a friend which goes "I desire the same thing i would never give up, Brother" .Then discussing about that thing with him. Especially when you have been denied it for so long.It's a feeling like loving to sing spending almost all waking moment perfecting the craft but everyone you know is deaf . They love you but they can't appreciate it with some passion as you and then meeting another singer.I am intrested even though i am usually not intrested in non portal fantasy type of stories.I am actually intrested in this. It made me feel like something diffirent. Like not only i enjoyed it i also felt a need for such a brotherhood type friendship after reading the story.Style: pretty good. not average. better than average.Grammer: I don't know enough grammer to rate this. Wasn't able to spot mistakes.Story It's a new and unique feeling. Prologue is one of the best things i read. Not once i looked at a character in the story and thought "what a idiot". The story isn't unique but it really conveys emotions well. It's probably something subtle i can't put my finger on.
I absolutely love this novel. Entertaining, fun and has infinite potential. Original ideas(as much as it's possible) and loveable characters with actual personality.
