Feathers and Fangs: An Alpha's Transformation - Reviews

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Very interesting book, it is so different and I love it. can't wait for more (had me crying)

Leaving a decent review requires a decent novel. Which this doesn't qualify as....then again, I've read worse. Compared to most of the novels in this genre this is completely average copy-paste.MC is handed everything on a silver platter, women are nothing but cute background noise, face slapping happens regularly and the MC takes to violence like a starved sociopath in a country that appear to have neither law nor government oversight. [This sentence could have been structured better, but i'm too lazy]. The patriotism is very blatant, but it doesn't affect the novel much. (I'm quite numb to this by now). After chapter 58 and onwards it turns to fanning hate, stereotyping and talk of race. (Normal patriotic behavior, nothing new to most of us  cynical readers).If you have nothing else to read and can look past the the more unsavory and illogical parts, it's okay.Wishfulfilment at its best or worst, take your pick.

I must say I'm impressed after finishing this novel. Although it started of a bit fast, I still understand nd the novel very well. It's all about coaching,  and it's interesting to see the POV of the man behind the famous athletes. It also contains host and system interactions which are not too many and for me, that is okay. If you're looking for a novel to pass the time, here's the novel for you.

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This is the novel I’ve been waiting for. I am so excited for this novel and where the story arcs. I hope Webnovel picks up this novel. The translation and spelling are well done.

One of the most satisfying and fast-paced books I’ve ever read. Everyone progresses very quickly but not in a way that feels forced or wrong. The world building is pretty good. It’s one of the very few books to pull off a universe-level scale setting well. It’s not perfect but it’s more than good enough. The power system is incredibly fun and mc’s plot armor is explained by it(which imo is a great way to give an mc plot armor)Thank you Author for all you hard work

While the premise was fairly decent, the writing needs to be changed quite a bit. The character dialogues needs to be in separate sentences sometimes. What you did here just made everything feel cramped and cold to read. I'll take a paragraph from your novel as an example here;----------------------------------------------------------------------------Alright, open the gates. The commander wanted to meet him

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This book is great! (I am trying to get free chapters)!lllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllv