fatherless yetim - Reviews

the mc is an ace soldier who is the best according to the author but in truth he's such a retarded blabbermouth idiot who can't even keep a secret.the fmc ask him to never tell anyone, anysoul about their relationship and this retarded mc promised not to tell anyone and in the next chapter this retarded mc opened his mouth and immediately tell the others about his relationship to the fmc even though the others dont believed him. ace soldier tskk it should be ace retard

I would love it if only the MC was an adult.Instead of a(literally impossible)baby                                                                        

The synopsis is a lie. The MC didn't regress in time, there were no multipliers either, instead it's an enhancing system.As for the story itself, it's very slow paced from the first few chapters, mostly on the worrying views of the MC himself regarding his environment.

Writing Quality: 5/5Story Development: 5/5Character Design: 4/5Updating Stability: 5/5World Background: 4/5Go ahead and check it out.. Good quality read. Never stretches out the actions and bores you.

Glad that see that this story is back. I really enjoyed it and I hope to see it grow like Once a Human Now a Parasite. Re;Hells Gate has great potential, a great story, and a great writer at its helm. Thanks for bringing it back Crow.

"I...don't know what he did... It wasn't a qi technique...It wasn't a primal essence technique either...but I know that Xin Fan will lose..."

        "why are you staring?" I asked, lifting my eyebrow.

Avanced Braking System 2.0

"What the f*** is your problem? I said put on some clothes not come down here naked, for goodness sake there's a lady in the room"

Let me share few things I have decided for the original novel:

I walked in front of god and knelt and bow in front of god while having some manly tears leaking on the side of my eye,

It’s not bad.