Fate's Enchantment - Reviews

I give five star to translation quality and updates, I give poor rating to story development and world background. why?  First time I read this novel, instantly I'm in love with it. so  i decide to look for the raw. But what greet me isn't something beautiful, remember Dr. Strange vs Dormamu scenes in marvel movie? thats how it feels when reading this novel, you have been put in a time loop! Yes, this novel selling points is only repetitive story about "what kind of reaction the customer will make when...

Timeline is all over the place, one moment hes core formation and now hes regressed to foundation establishment. Also, some things are just wholly unexplained, with bad translations on top of that

Try it. I guarantee this is very different from I AM ACTUALLY A CULTIVATION BIGSHOT or I AM THE MC, WHY DO I SUCK AT CULTIVATION.I already read all near 300 chapters. And believe me it was much better than I anticipated it to be.

Very poorly written and haphazard storyNot worth bothering to read even 40 chapters in trial read. The character is one dimensional and there doesn't seem to be any plot at all for the story. Total waste of time.

I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.

unique concept, good humor, good world background.                                                                                                          .

Great concept with lots of potential. The   best things to work on with a small concept piece like this would be to expand on details and make the story more full and give it life. My advice to the author would be to keep writing and constantly look at others work as well as asking for constant criticism from family friends and strangers(doing great there). Keep on writing!

This is a nice story, indeed. I agree with all the positive reviews here. I fell in love with the author's narrative style from the synopsis. I don't usually read sci-fi, however, I honestly anticipate how this tale will unfold. The MC snatched my heart, because I can deeply connect with him.

After reading the first 3 chapters, in my opinion, it didn’t show a good introduction to the story and what is going on.

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