Fatebreaker: The Genius of Konoha - Reviews

This novel is a bit boring in the beginning but gets better and better of you keep reading. This novel too might have been selected for voting pool if it had been written in a dumb foolish manner with a load of nonsensical cliches (this $hitty webnovel site prefers that kind of novels).If any one know its name in its native language or has a link for the raws please share it here

An interesting story in an interesting world. I like, that there are some unique and interesting powers. Characters are relatable, especially the dorm senior. Well done author! Added to library and waiting for more!

first of all, don't make this cringe, and second of all give it some slice of life moment to enjoy the world and make the mc have some level of common sense,don't make him like [ you dare to hit me now I kill you literary] don't make him have a harem, and most importantly don't make him unsatisfied with what he gains,make him smart where he uses the most efficient way to increase his power,don't give the  skip training instant power moment, in this kind of novel progress of every moment make us happy and make him smart enough to  finding new way to make him strong and earn some money.if you are saying that it became suspicious then I will tell you some thing instantly attaining power is more suspicious and if he work other area and work on his power he will gain power and money and most importantly knowledge and experience.

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I can see why the first chapter could make people uncertain about continuing the novel.First chapter is a little awkward in the way it's done, but after that, it's pretty good, enough that you forget that first chapter.I feel like the pace is good and that it's interesting enough to keep reading.If I had one thing to improve, it would probably be the dialogue, but since I'm reviewing this early on, it's probably already fixed. Chapter one and chapter two is day and night, so chapter 70+ should be even better.

Jens : "Yeah… I know… Thank you, Echidna."

It is obvious from how the letter was made and how much security was put on it that its contents were incredibly important.

Maaf, tapi di HP saya ngga ada nama kamu..

THIS NOVEL IS DROPPED

as a daoist of culture, I want to say just one thing about this story

I'm the Author, and I believe I did a pretty good job.

Very promising, for those who are not afraid of the poison of labels.What doesn't kill you, makes you stronger.I give it 4 stars for the moment (up to chapter 4), but since I know there are many with emotional problems who don't know fiction from reality I have to balance the scales at 5.