Fate’s Design - Reviews

if you like seeing the mc get cucked than this novel is for you, I'm sorry just not into that good luck author ,******************************************************************************

Rom-com story with OP female lead, haven't seen any struggle but only fluff and FMC spoiling the MC. It is good to read and I give me lot of laughs. Almosta NPC are humorous, you should give it a try.

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Start of the book is interesting. Hopefully FL gets her revenge as planned ◡̈

i personally don't like it but that doesn't mean you shouldn't try it, I feel like everything felt a little too generic and it's really not just one thing, a lot of the decisions (pointed out in the paragraph comments by a few people) are just super generic and cliche, also the Ki/Mana in the world the author has made is called Ora and it just doesn't slide off the tongue well which was kinda awkward for me aswell. but it's pretty good you should check it out if you have spare timeps. I only got 10 or so chapters in and supposedly it gets better later so yeah you should probably read a bit longer than i did

This web novel is great. I rarely write reviews because of my bad English but I want to write a review of this novel. 1. Writing Quality - Writing Quality is Good there are some mistakes and it too improves as story progress. But the main problem lies in understanding who said what. I mean, for example, there is "I know it's you who did this"written But no explanation said this you need to guess who said that but thankfully this rarely happens and you can read this without spoiling your reading experience.2. Character Development - Character development is one of the main points for me in reading this novel and writing this review. Both ML and FL personalities develop as the story progresses. Anna grows from a narcissistic, Self Center, arrogant, Selfish young master type person to a kindhearted person who helps others Although change is this big it's not forced and understandable. There too are some problems like Anna acting childish even though she is returne and Noel's hate seems somewhat fake and forced but overall it's great. 3. Update stability - Too good to be true.4. Characteristics - Noel - Kindhearted but if you give him the option to choose between his life or an innocent person's life he definitely chooses himself, Smart person, perfect for an ML. Anna - A little dumb and childish but perfect for FL.

"Insanity deactivate".. Biglang nawalan Ng Malay SI Bermas at habang si Might ay Wala parin sa katinuan..

Kaylee put the cloak and mask in her little world and sigh in relief. She is in the right time. Her eyes sparkled as she stare at Belle.

"You're right he died and now I am bring you to him. He is waiting in his courtyard. Also he may have changed a bit, mostly in appearance though." Pearl calmly said.

Hablame Géiser cree que Julius pudra sobrevivir a la maldición de ese nefasto ser?, tranquilo Lord Brandom el joven amo muestra signos de estar despertando, lo que sea que ese brujo nefasto buscara al parecer no lo consiguió lograr, aunque no logro entender como el joven amo con su pobre constitución pudo sobrevivir a tan fuerte conjuro, pero demos gracias a los dioses por brindarle otra oportunidad.

Kakashi and Hana just look confused and they do that. I join them after getting Naruto's permission.

Dropping the book, "I can do that?! why didn't you tell me this sooner?? he yelled at the system. "I thought it was obvious with some previous knowledge being directly absorbed into your mind before, Master Salem." Replied the system, which he thought sounded like it was smiling down at him. Picking up the book he willed it to him and in a flash, he felt the words melding with him the small moves he should make, the respect he should or shouldn't show.