Fatal Desires: The Luna’s Revenge - Reviews

While I do like the story..it's feels like it was made for kids..the time spent describing the event that happen in the Mac's school is way more than the dedication the time actually spent on improving the story development wise..i feel like whatever happened since Chapter 1-69 has no bearing on the story and it's something that can just be said in passing. I have only read up until this point but don't really feel the excited to continue.While it's sometimes exciting, you are immediately doused with water after 2 or 3 chapters

I Love this story it's absolutely hilarious, it starts off a little slow so I encourage you to power through the first dozen or so chapters until the story picks up momentum but once it does its a gentleman's novel that knows how to keep you amused. I recommend this novel to all who understand that all men have perverted thoughts its just about whether they are honest about them or not.

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Intelligence - 475

Leone screamed in pleasure as soon as his tongue entered her. His tongue was maniacally messing up her insides. Leone's legs felt weaker and began to shake like a newborn calf. Soon she let out a seductive moan after squirting all over Sinbad drenching him in her juices.

Fortunately, Jen reached the premises of demesne and heard the Dean, she calmly walked through the way.

"Bisakah orang barbar yang tidak beradab setidaknya mencoba untuk mengambil kesulitan kita dengan serius? Secara pribadi aku merasa bahwa Shirou-san telah mengemukakan banyak poin serius."Asuka menatap tajam ke arah Izayoi, yang mengangkat bahu dan menyeringai sebagai jawaban.

Gongzi Yu tersenyum. "Dia pasti sangat kuat, dan juga sangat muda."

"Big brother, wake up! wake up!" said Leng.

You'll never know if you don't go

I've read up to 405 and I am positively surprised. The story is well written, makes sense most of the time (within the built up world background). The characters feel alive and interesting. Up until now I have not found any "useless" characters. The readers also don't get all thought processes of the MC "upfront" so there are surprises from time to time (which I personally like).Fazit: Give it a try and keep with the story   at least after the "lost dungeon arc" before judging.

It's really good stuff just too early to enjoy the full story.