You know what's amazing about this text? The dialogue is almost entirely understated, and that's what makes it hit so hard.
Let's look at Grandpa Qin's few lines. He asks Qin Ziheng: "Do you know him? He has big eyes, a fair clean little face, so pretty. If you see him, tell him to come home after school to see his grandfather. Grandfather misses him." That's it. That's the entire personality of this man in three sentences. He's proud of his grandson, he's gentle, he's simple. And he calls him "Bao Wa'er"—a nickname that's clearly full of affection. The author doesn't need to describe Grandpa Qin's face or his voice; the dialogue does it all.
Then Qin Ziheng's response: nothing. "Every time, it cut Qin Ziheng to the heart, choked him so he couldn't get out a single word." The silence IS the dialogue here. His inability to speak is more eloquent than any speech ever could be.
And the present-day interactions? Even more sparse. "Xiao Heng, you're back?" "Mm." That's it. Two words from Qin Ziheng to his uncle, and you can feel the entire history of their relationship in that single syllable. The awkwardness, the distance, the unspoken resentment—all compressed into one sound.
Qin Ziwen's dialogue is different: "Big brother." Just two words, but the honesty and warmth in them is immediate. And Qin Ziheng's response—ruffling his hair, telling him to focus on the exam—shows a completely different side of him. With Qin Ziwen, he's not the successful elite; he's just the older cousin who cares.
The shopkeeper's wife and the young bride's conversation is more chatty, more expository, but it serves a purpose—it's the outside world's perspective on Qin Ziheng, the gossip and curiosity that frames him before he even appears. And when the shopkeeper's wife says "Oh! Bao Wa'er's back," the entire village shifts. Everyone turns to look. The dialogue triggers the scene.
The author's narrative voice is also worth noting—it's observant, empathetic, never judgmental. It describes Qin Ziheng's appearance with genuine admiration ("a walking suit-clad heartbreaker") but never mocks the villagers for being awestruck. The tone is warm, like someone telling you a story they care about.