Fantasy Otherworld: Rise - Reviews

This is one of those that needs to be mentioned.  Here we have an interesting/fun concept ruined by several problems.  The main problem is the overbearing racism/nationalism, which for someone who is Chinese might be soothing to their perception that only China and the Chinese people deserve to exist.  Several minor problems include, this being a waste of potential for an interesting superpower.  Why the heck did the author go the route of exporting farming produce to the real world?  Potions would make a much better idea.  The author took the idea of entering the game and turned it into entering the farming game.  When bringing unrealistic products out of a game into reality, the owner should be going for minimal transfer, as eventually people will be looking into where all these items are coming from.  At least the author is trying to setup some sort of source for the MC, but the MC has no background to be able to own such a source.  There is absolutely no way such a MC would be able to retain his freedom, especially in China.

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Not sure, how many Chapters, it says I've read, but I read it before it was on Qidan. It was one of my first before I knew of mainstream novels such as Desolate Era, Coiling Dragon, Stellar Transformations and etc. (Note, their author)During the time I read it, it was one of my favorites.(The bar was pretty low back then, as I didn't know the above novels)Story Development, Character Design and World Building are slightly reminiscent of Martial God Asura in repetitiveness.But, as long as they don't keep continuing, like Martial God Asura, and stop somewhere such as #### Stage, instead of finding a higher Realm and continuing the same thing as the beginning. They should be fine

The pacing is a bit slow but I feel it will get better with time. This novel has got a different feel to it, it isn’t a cliché start and the characters are likeable. This is my own opinion.

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All around a great novel really lovr the story and the characters, also you usee my name in one of your chapters so that deserves 5 stars alone.

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"If you can't tell us your name, can you tell us a bit about you?" her eyes wandered around the place, feeling wary but she did her best to drift her thoughts away from it.

When he saw the manner in which one of his crew was killed, he looked down at the samurai in his hand wanting nothing more than to kill him right there and now but managed to restrain himself. He threw him over to the rest of his men and glared icily at the mystery man in the sky.

We need to work with dialogue, it reminds me of a play more, but I have the same problem when writing stories. Probably it is worth honoring in Google how to write dialogs correctly.