Falling apart in moonlight - Reviews

An amazing storyline

honestly it's a good book ,but it seems to be focusing more on everything other than football itself ,which isn't a bad thing but just isn't my cup of tea keep up the good work??

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First let me tell you something. This novel is not bad but the author is full of sh*t. It is ok as far as the genre of op protagonists goes. You will see face smacking and you will see an overbearing protagonist. The reason why I gave this novel a bad rating is because of a certain paragraph in the 59th chapter. Idk why it ticked me of so much since I'm quite used to bullsh*t chinise nation*lism, but this one was so over my fking tolerance bar.The current antagonist in that chapter says something and then says how popular it is in western countries. He literally could have said that it is popular with some minority of sick people. But nooooo its popular in the horrid West. Fck off!!!

Not gonna lie I was intrigued by the first chapter. I love details when I'm reading a novel and so far the chapters that I have read deliver.Secondly, the build up promises for an awesome politics + cultivation adventure and I'm down for it.Five star review for the moment.Gonna review again after reading more chapters

Honestly, I have absolutely loved your other books, so I have no doubts that this is one with insane potential and that you can use all of its potential CORRECTLY. Although I dropped Against Heaven's Will, it was still a great book. I hope you don't drop this like you did Chameleon: My True Face. Also, a petition to please bring back Chameleon: My True Face.

completed at 273? is the author san dead?

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Upon hearing this, Xiao Han knew that they were telling the truth and retracted his aura.

"Where am I ? what is this place? What's going on?" When shinji woke up the only thing he saw was the darkness surrounding him.he couldn't feel his body he couldn't even move, the only thing he could do was thinking.

Olivus saw it all, even Ash couldn't see it but he saw how a spirits descend unto him. Kissing him on the forehead and hugging him without knowing.

By the way, those who can teleport to any place (even those they haven't visited) are overwhelmingly high existences. Even among my subordinates only Diablo can do it… probably. It's not a skill you can use unless you've got a spiritual body.