Fallen World - Reviews

I had a hard time reading the book and stopped at chapter 15. The plot seems good but the grammatical errors were pretty bad and some of the terminology used was offensive. If you choose to read, be aware that English is likely not the author’s first language. Heavy editing would be appropriate.

I love your synopsis. “melting my daughter's heart,” now I want to read your book

it was very disappointing the way you ended this story it's a shame the ending ruined the story .....