Fallen Horizon - Reviews

This is a bit weird point to say, but I like how a lot of plot points and characters try to justify Riley’s behavior and actions only for it to be irrelevant since Riley is the way he is because that’s how he is, Riley is Riley. A monster in human form and who’s irredeemable no matter what. (Touché to the author for creating a unique masterpiece of a story)

this story is soooo slow and boring that even for free limited reading time, I had to give up on it . don't waste your time trying to read it

The MC forms a team and the first member of that team is, in the words of the author "a legal loli" and it's creepy af. the author constantly sexualised the person who "looks like a 12 year old girl" and it's weird af

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The story is great! The chapters are a bit iffy because of some word mistakes and such, but man, a VR Moba that's similar to Lol and Dota 2? Count me in! The story really picks up after the first few chapters, although the MC isn't OP and lacks any knowledge of the game, but he's equipped with very great swordsmanship, courtesy of Mr. Ghost-san. The character development is also pretty clear and I can't wait to read more. I'd like to see how our MC takes his unambitious character and changes it for the better!

If you, like me, came to read this novel hoping for a cold protagonist, as the tag on NovelUpdates says, I'm sorry to inform you, you won't find it here. In this novel we have the typical white and loving MC knight. I read this until chapter 175 and couldn't take it anymore, I was forced to leave it. The MC is extremely childish and spoiled, despite all these chapters there is not a tiny advance in the MC mentality

Seems to be a very interesting story the summary makes the story look to be a great novel. I will read this story for sure. Keep the story coming.

At 1st I like the story but in the main character start to become way too nice.

"Oh!" uttered Cain, while looking at the wolf.

*DING*

I said churning her pussy to find her sweet spot of pleasure as Rias can feel the same sensations as my cock also finding her sweet spots of pleasure as she grit's her teeth to not let her moans out from how good it feels

While I was busy criticizing them, I unknowingly stopped using my strength to hold back against her pull, "Hey stop day dreaming and you better hold on tightly or else you will get hurt." 'huh, what did she say? No no is she about to jump. "ahhhhh" ' I screamed as I held her tightly.