Fairy Tale of the Tentacle Forest - Reviews

This was fine. It’s an interesting premise, but it feels barely explored due to its short length.

Strangely, this doesn’t really feel like yaoi. The main character (MC) gets attacked by tentacles at most, but I didn’t get the sense that the male lead (ML) viewed him sexually. This could legitimately have the yaoi tag removed without changing the content. At least, that’s how I feel, lol.

Sure, here’s the revised version:

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Kinda Meh.

It’s a one-shot, so I get that there isn’t much to write, but it feels way too rushed. It could have benefited from a few more paragraphs to flesh out the interactions between the characters.

However, if this were part of a longer story, I think it has a lot of potential.

such a great story looking forward to it