Failing to Keep a Distance from My Love Rival - Reviews

Nice book,keep it up

You know the base of the story is great but it feels like he’s trying to put to many pieces from to many different puzzles and then make it fit I like the story but it is insanely complex

I vote because i dont want another romance webnovel thats it. And the picture looks nice. Lel. What i have nothing more to say

I feel it, in my balls!                                                                                                                    .

This novel is very intriguing enough to be recommended in webnovel. I love your novel writing pace, skills and knowledge you are really a brilliant author.??

This is a really great story but wish it had more chapters. One hasn't been posted since January but this novel is really good the author took feedback like being “to Japanese” and stuttering and changed the personality of the main character  through plot development and my guess was that she planned for the main character to hide his identity but he ended up not doing that which really surprised me and its a new change of pace where the mc isn’t a complete wimp and hides his identity I really like it and I didn’t catch myself being frustrated by the main character hiding his strength nor was the main character a dimwit. I just hope the author keeps releasing chapters.

Стабильность обновлений на высоте, так сказать впечатляет. Судя по этой истории, мне не терпится увидеть больше (MC) и то, на что он способен в тот момент,  мне нравится стиль письма, и я рад видеть, что нас ждет в следующих главах. Мне очень нравится этот роман

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Writing Quality  great ?Updating stability  awesome?Story development gets better and better and author provide alternate visual map for the story?Character design female lead is epic!??World background its nice?

I Really like this novel, while the writing still needs improvement so it would be better if u hire a proof reader and pay him to help u with the novel, other than this I really like ur plot and ur style of writing I see potential in this work as I saw in BW  its just that I felt empty when BW ended but This novel  gives me the Same vibe as BW and I hope that u do a better work then him. ❤️❤️?

nice, so far keep going, no I'll be glad to read more of your books

(Avalon's POV)