Eye System - Reviews

character is too emotional for my taste,got up to chap 79 and thought that he'll reflect on his past and calm down and says so but his actions speak louder the  his words ironically.

enjoying the novel so far hope the author doesn't drop it.nice work btw

Another Shameless review, but this time I come with important news.
1) I opened a server. Discord Server: https://discord.gg/TtnGfdKanr
2) The novel is being edited and will be improved when I get time to go back to it

Before reading i just have to add..
Yato's eyes ftw
..And damn required characters for reviews..............................................

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This novel had great potential. But I can't read it any longer, too much forced interactions. Ella's interaction is too forced for me to continue this novel. Well it's ur story so all I could do is vent here. Best of luck

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this novel have a lot of potential BUT it's just not my cup of tea about the talking system and feel weird about it ..

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reading the first 20 chaps and the story line feels forced and unrealistic. but i love the concept and hope to enjoy more.                  .

I just recently bumped and read this novel and I say this is kind of underrated with a bigger potential. Well written and deserve to get a full five stars! If you are looking for a story with gaming vibe, don't hesitate and start reading this now.

I liked it up till ch 20 then slowly lost intrest but keep up the good work great concept plus may not be my cup of tea but may be someone elses

The concept the plot of the novel is great at least I liked it, just has some grammatical errors which will soon be fixed as the edited ones are underway. It's about a child named Lex builled the whole life and gets thrown off a cliff acquire the eye system. Although maybe op for for the current is actually not so op according to author as the universe and rest hasn't been explored, I advise you guys to read it, it's a bit more fresh than typical novels.