Extra: The Will of the End - Reviews

There's no shapeshifting. This is actually a story of a male protagonist's every action being praised and revered by a group of rabid female fans. The rabid fans take his every word as gospel. They organise lynch mobs against anyone who dares talk ill of the protagonist. And of course, all the fans are incredibly beautiful, from powerful backgrounds, or have something else about that that's incredible. Surely there's other ways of stroking one's ego than reading this. This author must have a massive inferiority complex.

a novel more concerned about the management of various people than actually intelligent story-telling. most of the middle ream of this novel revolves around MC saving various relatives, random chicks he meets, and ect... if youre expecting a great adventure full of the exploration into the unknown, dungeon diving, and epic martial arts you've come to the wrong town.the novel tricks you though, the first 500~ or so chapters are really well done, the interactions between the MC and various people FEELS natural, and it takes a grim dark tone that sets you up for a truly intellectual story. but when the MC starts saving all those people, you know youve stepped on a turd, that is more concerned with happy-endings than having an ***** conversation with consequences for actions.a true shame, nothing real here, all intellectually bankrupt.

Coooool! Very funny. The story is still at the very begining, but it sounds preeetty promising. Hoping to read some more soon, need more chapters...

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Overall I’d say pretty good, one thing I appreciate is that the writing and grammar is readable without egregious mistakes. World setting and character design is fairly in depth and thorough although sometimes I find myself lost in terms of the different powers of stuff. Sure the author has clearly laid out the power structure but it’s easy to forget when switching between colors and tiers and the “well this person has a tier 3 core but their attacks are tier 4” idk maybe it’s just me but I find it confusing.A word of caution, this book is nauseatingly cliche, I won’t take away stars for it because it was warned at the beginning but sometimes I find myself just wanting to skip the long sections of cliche wholesomeness. Personally I’d like to see a bit darker of a setting with more conflict.

I like the story, nothing else to say. Hh

"Of course!"

Umbrum could not help but be curious about it, it was likely the contrary of hurt, it was even easing his pain and relaxing him. Casually smiling, Drake faked a punch on his leg and reply on a light tone, without shame.

~ Rex's P.O.V ~

looking over the personal cryo chamber he personal designed in action to this day still made him giddy. Turning the signal up the wind from the helicopter whipped his dark grey hair into a frenzy as the soldiers strapped  the container for transport as started there journey shortly after. looking over his research dr.Jirkins was unable to spot the crow before it was to late as the screams from the crow pecking his eye out was over shadowed by the cluster of darkness that consumed the helicopter and surrounding area as the gunshots rang out to scare them away only to drive them to attack the soldiers as there fight lasted for minutes until the soldiers claimed the upper hand as one got luck and stumbled into the machine gun bolted to the flank of the helicopter and managed to take down a quarter of the swarm with relative ease ending there surprise attack with them claiming 2 soldiers lives and varying injuries among the rest. watching the helicopter flee the swarm turned tail and flew back to there nest as the orders given have been carried out there job is done.

I bowed my head. Looked at the tablet on my lap, on it was his image frozen in time. We were in my favorite place. The Meadow. He placed a kiss at my head as he hugged me from behind. A picture of us immortalized.

-HAH !?